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Title: Of (an endless supply of nicotine, and) us
Author: [livejournal.com profile] lorielen
Fandom: Velvet Goldmine
Pairing: Curt/Brian
Rating: M
Summary: The uncomplicated story of how Curt came to call Brian “glitterhead”.
Beta: The lovely [livejournal.com profile] vainwithglitter *squishes* Any remaining mistakes are amine.
Disclaimer: Todd Haynes’, even though I’d treat them much better.

(16/out/07)EDIT: because I no longer trust LJ with my material, I've moved Of (an endless supply of nicotine, and) us to IJ.

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*cross-posted to: [livejournal.com profile] velvet_goldmine and [livejournal.com profile] wolf_spacequeen

Date: 2006-09-17 05:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] culuyetille.livejournal.com
*huggles back* I got both your e-mails, and I read the "first draft". I really like it =] You've portrayed their tiredness and hunger for each other so well, it was heartbreaking. I loved the idea of the tape, it's so Brian, being afraid to face Curt but trusting that pouring his heart out would, should somehow make a difference. I'll just wait for the modified version before sending you a more detailed commentary, I suppose ;]

And, brilliant song. So fitting it's scary!

Date: 2006-09-17 06:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xr8fordgirl.livejournal.com
I was worried it's too long but I can't get it any shorter without sacrificing the continuity of the story line

I'm just adding more emotion in it I think and dragging the smoochies out a bit. They need lots of smoochies, yes?

When I first heard the song I wondered if Kelly Jones (singer of Stereophonics) hadn't written it about Curt and Brian being a good friend of Ewan's and all.

Date: 2006-09-18 10:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] culuyetille.livejournal.com
Hey, don't say things like that. I wish I could write longer stories like you do. *sighs*

They need all the smooching they can get. Btw, I've been meaning to ask you something for a while now. Where do you stand with role-playing? Because it's one of my favourite ways of having fun with characters, and we seem to share a more or less compatible time zone ;)

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