FIC: Of (an endless supply of nicotine, and) us. Curt/Brian, M

[culuyetille]

Title: Of (an endless supply of nicotine, and) us
Author: lorielen
Fandom: Velvet Goldmine
Pairing: Curt/Brian
Rating: M
Summary: The uncomplicated story of how Curt came to call Brian “glitterhead”.
Beta: The lovely vainwithglitter *squishes* Any remaining mistakes are amine.
Disclaimer: Todd Haynes’, even though I’d treat them much better.

(16/out/07)EDIT: because I no longer trust LJ with my material, I've moved Of (an endless supply of nicotine, and) us to IJ.

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*cross-posted to: velvet_goldmine and wolf_spacequeen

Comments

[bboinnng.livejournal.com]

Damn, you write beautifully!!! I cannot BELIEVE English is not your first language. You certainly write better than many whose first language IS English- including me! Here is one of my favorite parts of your story, which I found 1) scorching hot - for Bri to suddenly come out and ask such a deliciously filthy question out of the blue, and 2) for Curt to not take the bait, but instead to respond as he does, in a way that lets him know that he takes his love for Brian very seriously and expects Brian to respect it as he does.

Lovely!


"I quite like it, actually." Brian tilted his head to one side, moaning as Curt worried his earlobe between his teeth. "Will you howl when you come inside me tonight? I'd like that."

Jesus! As if Curt weren't already throbbing with the mere scent of him. Then something occurred to the American and he pulled back to give Brian a no-nonsense look.

"Only if you promise to never make lyrics out of this."

Don’t perform us. I fucking love you, you prissy idiot. All the things Curt didn’t say but knew Brian had heard anyway.

[culuyetille.livejournal.com]

*blushes* Thank you! Your words mean a lot to me, and I'm very glad you enjoyed this story!

Well, in truth, when Brian asked that, it was a) pure diversional tactics, because he wanted to think about what Curt'd said later and then come back to the fight when he had ammunition and b) a spur of the moment thing, because the idea aroused him and he's whimsical like that (to me) ;)

You're completely right about Curt, he does intend to try and make Brian see that what they have is not to be treated lightly. *nods* ....damn, canon kills me. >.