Date: 2006-09-26 01:32 am (UTC)
Damn, you write beautifully!!! I cannot BELIEVE English is not your first language. You certainly write better than many whose first language IS English- including me! Here is one of my favorite parts of your story, which I found 1) scorching hot - for Bri to suddenly come out and ask such a deliciously filthy question out of the blue, and 2) for Curt to not take the bait, but instead to respond as he does, in a way that lets him know that he takes his love for Brian very seriously and expects Brian to respect it as he does.

Lovely!


"I quite like it, actually." Brian tilted his head to one side, moaning as Curt worried his earlobe between his teeth. "Will you howl when you come inside me tonight? I'd like that."

Jesus! As if Curt weren't already throbbing with the mere scent of him. Then something occurred to the American and he pulled back to give Brian a no-nonsense look.

"Only if you promise to never make lyrics out of this."

Don’t perform us. I fucking love you, you prissy idiot. All the things Curt didn’t say but knew Brian had heard anyway.
This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting

Profile

culuyetille: (Default)
culuyetille

mostly a personal journal written by a fandom girl.

May 2012

S M T W T F S
  12345
6789101112
131415161718 19
20212223242526
2728293031  

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Jun. 11th, 2025 10:22 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios